Thursday, December 1, 2011

Revised: Bloody Jack

Dear Mary/Jacky,

How's life in the sea? Are you enjoyin' it? Are there lots of nice people? I hope so. I wrote this letter to tell you that we miss ya here in London. We hope you are doing very fine ever since the Dark Day. I'm sure your parents are restin' in such a great peace. I forgot to tell you that the lil' girls mom that had given you some change had come back to us and found a small home for us! It's better then bein' out on the streets. They're so nice. I really hope you come back soon 'cause we miss ya so much. What can we do without havin' a lil bit of Mary in our lives? Well we're figurin' that out right now. Hopefully see ya soon!

Plenty of love,
Charlie

I had written this letter to Mary from Charlie because Mary and Charlie were very close when Mary was in London. Mary used to live on the streets because her parents had both passed away which was why they called it the Dark Day. In the book, they didn't really bring up Charlie ad I kept on thinking about him. Charlie was one of her close friends she met. When Mary was in London she had met this mother and daughter and was begging them for money and they felt bad for her. So what I did was say make a inference and said that she gave Charlie a home! I really liked this book. It had an intense plot and just kept me reading.